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rate this poem?

I wish you knew this other ride

Travels to a different side

Where everything just seems to be slowing

But the miles just keep on rolling

The road fades midnight black and blue

But chances are you have no clue

Most come here to post

Others to just get lost

To disappear

And then reappear

With clearer thoughts in pursue

But chances are you have no clue

I’m back on this road again

Allied with my very best friend

Penciling all the things I lack

And all the things I got right on track

All my missed chances

All those so close dances

And how those dreamy dreams almost came true

But chances you have no clue

Update:

Scale of 1 - 10

1 = bad

10 = good

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  • Steph
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Nice, I enjoyed the way you tied together the last lines in each paragraph.

  • 1 decade ago

    Scale of 1 to 10 about an 8.

  • 1 decade ago

    10

  • Andy
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Thats a really nice poem. I'd give it about 9 - 10

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  • anna
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    wow, on a scale of 1 to 10...8, its pretty good

    what's the title?

  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    A good poem. I rate it a 9.

  • 1 decade ago

    I like that poem. I do. And for that reason alone, I will give it a 10.

  • 1 decade ago

    A+

  • 1 decade ago

    Bravo, :) needs some editing,, care to give a clue? i'll listen

  • 1 decade ago

    sorry to be too much of a critic, i say, 5 out of 10, i mean "dreamy dreams", is not that a bit too cliche?

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