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rate this poem?
I wish you knew this other ride
Travels to a different side
Where everything just seems to be slowing
But the miles just keep on rolling
The road fades midnight black and blue
But chances are you have no clue
Most come here to post
Others to just get lost
To disappear
And then reappear
With clearer thoughts in pursue
But chances are you have no clue
I’m back on this road again
Allied with my very best friend
Penciling all the things I lack
And all the things I got right on track
All my missed chances
All those so close dances
And how those dreamy dreams almost came true
But chances you have no clue
Scale of 1 - 10
1 = bad
10 = good
16 Answers
- StephLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
Nice, I enjoyed the way you tied together the last lines in each paragraph.
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- ShadowfyreLv 61 decade ago
sorry to be too much of a critic, i say, 5 out of 10, i mean "dreamy dreams", is not that a bit too cliche?