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What do you think of this poem I wrote for a girl?

YOU

I just wanted you to know

I met someone last week.

Even though she doesn’t think so,

I think, she's very sweet.

I know that she worries allot

and never seems to have time.

I wish l could convince her,

that everything will be fine.

I know she is hurting inside,

from things in her past.

I wish she would count on me

and let her tears, fall at last.

She's such a special lady

In so many wonderful ways.

Her heart is like, the beauty of Roses,

that blossom, on warm summer days.

So l just wanted you to know,

I think she’s special and so beautiful too.

So I wrote a poem, about a lady you’ll never forget,

After all, its YOU!

By: Kenny P. AKA- Cobra

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  • 1 decade ago
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    If u don't put that poem in a book , magazine.or something then u have a problem. I LOVE THAT POEM! It's like...... unexplainable. But i myself love it, i wish that i could find a intelligent,sweet, caring man like you. That is my wish. I wish you the best of Luck for who so ever you're with. She has no choice but to love!!!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    A nice poem

  • 1 decade ago

    Thats very cute. Im sure the lucky someone will love it

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    awwwww thats soooo sweeet if a guy wrote me that i would kiss him and date him that poem was sooooo sweet only if u knew meee id probobly like you

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  • that is Beautiful i wish that someone cared enough about me to write something so sweet

    if you dont have poetry published you should relly lookinto it

    i LOVE IT

    *smile Jesus loves you *

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    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    It's actually very beautiful... thank you for sharing.

  • 1 decade ago

    i think that was great she willl love it.

    dang i need a MAN like you in my life

    :D

    Source(s): you should write more
  • 1 decade ago

    very sweet

  • 1 decade ago

    THAT IS SOOOOO CUTE! UGH I WISH MY BOYFRIEND WOULD DO THAT! THAT WAS GOOD!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    its very sweet

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