What do you think of this poem, about broken trust?

wow that was great,kid ur a great artist! get a manager and publish this now its dramatic and TRUE im a part time poet too u know im a doctor but this poem is great no matter how other ppl say its boring its not boring for me maybe u could tell someone about this poem of yours cause you'll get rich

I love poetry. This is one way to get your expressions out. It is healing for you as well. Your poem truly shows your dispare. Trust is rough in today's society. Remember it is something earned and not given. So you just take each day one step at a time and soon enough you will over come.

I thought it was a good poem with great expression.

Keep them comin'

i think it's beautiful. living well and moving past the pain of a broken trust is the best revenge. don't get stuck in the moment.

keep on writing. i think ur good.

* We stand previously you........the collective... with evidence our coronary heart's whilst dealt with bleed spilling at the same time Unfathomable intensity of soul drawing extra alike, shifting potential in the time of the sensory source of touch, exchanged with many, exceeded around in peace our center released. Caressed gently, warmed by using heated breath, with blind justified faith. Blood mingled, we ask for have confidence, the renewal of spirit, via acceptance. *

I always get this poem contest thing in the mail. You send them your poem, they tell you that you can win ten thousand dollars, then they publish your poem in a book and send you an order form for you to purchase the book.

Next time you get one of those junk mail coupon envelopes, look in there. I'm sure that they'll tell you it's great, and publish it in one of those wonderful books for you.

Personally, a poem is a poem. My kids do these in grade school.

I like it . It really tell how hard it is to trust people because they will take advantage of you.

I'm not sure I like it. I like happy poems. But its really good! Did you write it?

I liked it its well understood know excatly where your coming from! itll take time but that usually helps everyone heal goodluck to you!

Very good, I like it.

BORING!