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A poem of truth?

I made a mistake

I made a mistake in the past

That will always haunt me to the last

I let drugs and booze control my life

Which in the end took someone else’s life

Now here I sit a supposedly free man

But groups like MADD have another plan

After I done all my sentence

And made all my repentance

They don't want to see me succeed in life

So they plan to cause me nothing but strife

They petition the courts to change the laws

So that others like me are always at flaw

So here I sit in my house in the dark

Not even enough money to buy a spark

I can’t find any work without a license

And the bills are just a bothering nuisance

I tried my best to except these laws

But in the end I just stare at the walls

So here I sit with this bottle of pills

Wondering if they will cure all my ills

With no chance at living a normal life

I might as well end my miserable blight

Thanks to them I figured out a way

Of getting out of living another day

Update:

I wrote this poem for a friend of mine that took his life after trying to suceed in this world by doing everything legally. But his past stayed with him and he was always judged for it thusly never getting the chance to suceed. The way the laws are today anyone with a felony conviction is almost doomed. Its even worse for a felony dui manslaughter since groups like madd and others are the only ones making suggestions to how the laws should be. Guess my point was just take a look at the other side of things and not be closed minded to the fact people do change and should be able to have to chance to regain thier right to survive in todays time.

Update 2:

sorry for any typos ..rushing to get things in before power goes out again.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    That is a great poem. It really encourages people and lets you think from their point of view. Now, rappers are refering to these things as good, and how it will make you more "relaxed". That's not true at all.

    A wonderful and true depiction of somebody who made a mistake that they can't really turn around. It gets an "A+" in my book!

    Did you write it yourself? If so, you are a natural! If not, who did?

  • 1 decade ago

    I feel the question that is being asked, is whether I feel the poem truthfully states problems which can arise from the over-use of drugs or other addictive scenarios in todays daily living. My answer, therefore, would be, yes. If I have missed the point and meaning of this, please, would the person questioning the public, please explain?

    shorty

    Source(s): This answer is only my opinion and entirely my answer. There are no sources to list.
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