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So there's this poem...?
"Smile"
She sits there, a blank look on her face
Wondering why she was put on Earth in the first place;
Just to go unnoticed by her peers, her family included.
Then he walks in,
His mere breath makes her heart stop
He looks over and smiles, then walks to join his family.
She is bewildered, wondering how he noticed her, invisible even to herself.
It seems as if a burden has been lifted off of her back.
She was noticed, and she knows it,
A face with no expression miraculously turns into a smile.
She turns to look, and notices all of his features.
His golden hair,
His blue-green eyes,
His serene face, yet a mischievious air about him
As if at any moment he will burst out laughing.
The girl leaves, and he watches her contentedly,
Proud that he had made someone happy.
It will be something he will surely forget by tomorrow,
but for now, all is perfect.
As if in a dream...
I wake up, and Smile.
-Dedicated to someone I love, and want to love me back.
This is the first poem I had ever written, about a boy I met and instantly fell in love with. That was a year ago, and we've maybe said 5 words to each other. Hopeless romantic anyone? Haha, but I'd love to know what you think of it.
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I liked it. I'm a romantic too. I love making people smile by smiling at them. Just random people I walk by. It makes me feel happy and this poem reminds me of it.
- 1 decade ago
NEARLY A YEAR...AND YOU HAVE DONE >>>NOTHING<<< TO GET ANYWHERE WITH THIS??? HUNNY,I AM A WRITER AND A HOPELESS ROMANTIC...PLEASE MAKE A MOVE OR SOMETHING HERE...
I LOVE THE POEM, AND IT SOUNDS LIKE ME WHEN I MET MY *SUPPOSED TO BE TRUE LOVE(YOU CAN CHECK OUT MY YAHOO 360 PAGES PER ID OF MINE TO LEARN MORE). THE THING IS..HE ENDED UP NEARLY KILLING ME, YET THIS MAN >>>STILL<<< TAKES MY BREATH AWAY & I CRAVE HIM DAY & NIGHT TO BE BY MY SIDE.
A CRUSH IS A CRUSH...AND JUST THAT. LOVE...IS MANY THINGS..BE CAREFUL & GET TO KNOW SOMEONE WELL,BEFORE YOU BECOME INTIMATE,TO SAVE YOURSELF SOME HEARTACHE,HEARTBREAK & AGONY..AS I AM GOING THRU.
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