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Anonymous asked in Entertainment & MusicPolls & Surveys · 1 decade ago

Do you like this poem I wrote?

Judas, my father

Why do I bother

Trying to bond

And make you feel fond

Of the son you don't want.

Judas, my Dad

It makes me so sad

you don't care for,

no why, how, or wherefore

the son you don't want.

Judas, my pop

It's not jazz or hip-hop

It's truly the blues

The saddest of hues

From the son you don't want.

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    For that lovely poems I give you, from 1 to 10, a perfect 10.

    Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

  • 1 decade ago

    You should be a poet and begin to write some more poems.

    I recommend that you should start writting them out and when you have a collection them you can go to a publisher and have him publish all of your poems for you.

  • 1 decade ago

    Wow, that is touching. I am really sad now. Judas has some explaining to do. And now i am going to have nightmares tonight about broken families...

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Bravo, Puddles!!

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  • jobees
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    It sad and short

    but you still did a good job

  • 1 decade ago

    its really nice. i like it. its kinda sad but poems are usually sad .sorry about your dad. mines not around much either you just have to take day by day and thank god for the life you do have.

    :D

    god bless you!

  • 1 decade ago

    Funny...sad...the answers here are so confusing.

    But I got a smile out of it.

  • 1 decade ago

    I think it's wonderful! But, you know your daddy won't understand any of that, right!? He's just not the brightest crayon in the box!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very much

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Bahaha!That is hilarious...You did a great job.

    Your daddy will be proud :D

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