Can somebody please revise or correct this grammar?

I too am curious about faces and energies. Can you maybe describe the feelings you are trying to express and we can try to help you find some other way to get that across?

Say hello to Natasha, a 20 year old exotic Cuban-Chinese beauty from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel, & seeing new places while enjoying the local flair of the people and culture. Natasha would describe herself as positive, happy, intelligent, dependable, open minded, unique, goal oriented, and hard working. She's a girl that knows the importance of playing as hard as she works.

I just read that. It's a rough version, but gives you an idea. You need to thin out the 'describe herself as . . . ' There are just too many. You need to get across the important items. Take off the rest.

Say hello to Natasha, a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel and see new places, faces and energies (energies doesn't sound right... ). She is Cuban Chinese. She has a unique exotic appearance. She describes herself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open minded, goal oriented, and hard working.

Say hello to Natasha, a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel and see new places, faces and energies. Her nationality is Cuban Chinese. She HAS A very unique exotic look. She would describe HERself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open minded, goal oriented, and hard working.

nationality isn't right there - ethnicity ?

also perhaps open-minded, goal-oriented should have hypens

Say hello to Natasha, a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel and see new places, faces and energies. Her nationality is Cuban Chinese. She has a very unique, exotic look. She would describe herself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open minded, goal oriented, and hard working.

Energies? what do you mean by that, that terminology isnt common . . .

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Say hello to Natasha, a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel and see new places, faces and energies. Her nationality is Cuban Chinese. She HAS A very unique exotic look. She would describe HERself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open minded, goal oriented, and hard working.

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Say hello to Natasha, a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida. She loves to travel and see new places, faces, and energies. Her nationality is Cuban and Chinese. She has very unique, exotic look. She would describe herself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open-minded, goal-oriented, and hard-working.

Say hello to Natasha. Natasha is a 20 year old Chinese Cuban living in Miami, Florida. She has a very unique exotic look, and is very beautiful. Natasha is very open minded, and flexible, her friends know that they and depend on her in any situation. She loves travelling to see lots of different places, and meet many new people.

I don' t know this is really hard! lol. What are you writing this for? That would help more

Say hello to Natasha; a 20-year-old from Miami, Florida, who is a Chinese Cuban.

Natasha loves to travel and see new places and new faces, and she is full of energy. She has a very unique exotic look, and would decribe herself as joyful, intelligent, dependable, open minded, goal oriented, and hard working.

"energies" is an odd choice of words -- something more suitable, perhaps? "Unique" does not take a modifier -- something is either unique, or it isn't. Use "She has a unique exotic look" instead of "She's" [she is]. And she would describe herself.

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