Should I keep struggling with dialog or do a whole book of these?

Just give me something to read!!!

You are very lucky indeed, this is the only question I am answering today. I am taking a break from stage fright. I will give news tomorrow (or the day after).

You should read "Fight Club", b: C. Palahniuk , or "House of Leaves", b: M. Danielewski. "Fight Club" is a novel based on several conversations Palahniuk overheard or discussed with friends, that he eventually turned into a novel. "House of Leaves" is an ergodic piece, which is similar to being non-linear, meaning it's up to the reader to decide which sentences and words go together to form the concept of the novel. Both are incredibly intelligent works of literature that you may find inspiring.

If you could come up with a way to structure them together--the one page essays might make a good book. I like the one you posted in the other question.

I think i would write a book with these stories in it as they are fun to read' and i loved your's about the cold water I would love to buy a book like that' so get my spirts up' when feeling down.,It reminds me of those books chicken soup for the soul' and they became a best seller... lots of luck always

The story is very funny. I can see the little buggers now. Where did you say this place is? I'm a little dry myself.