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please correct my grammar?
My name is Sandra and I am a l actress/model. I've been working in Los Angelos, San Diego, Texas, and internationally for quite some time. I began modeling at 13, and following high school, turned down the offer to move to Milan and pursue modeling fullforce, and instead chose an education at the University of Texas. I just finished up my B.S. in Film Production, and I have moved to LA to pursue acting fulltime. I have an extensive resume and much experience. I am also very involved in filmmaking and fashion design. I am very professional, so please only contact me if you are sincerely interested.
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- I don't knowLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
My name is Sandra and I am an actor/model. I've been working in Los Angeles, San Diego, Texas, and internationally for quite some time. I began modelling at age 13. Following high school, I turned down an offer to move to Milan to pursue modelling full force. Instead I chose an education at the University of Texas. I just finished my Bachelor of Science in Film Production and have moved to LA to pursue acting full time. I am also very involved in filmmaking and fashion design. I have an extensive resume with a lot of experience. I am very professional, so please only contact me if you are sincerely interested. Thank you.
not much to fix, you have pretty good grammar.
the last part sounds kinda snobbish but maybe you want that.
Good luck!
