Wat do u think of the intro and first verse of this rap song i'm doin?

Intro

Number one, I stay shinin like da sun

Number two, never let a n***a punk u

Number three, I rep Nairobbery

Number four, always be about yo dough

Number five, always try to stay alive

Number six, never ever trust a chick

Number seven, make sure you get to heaven

Number eight, don't listen to those who hate

Verse 1

Boo! Get scared I'm a Real big monster

And nah I aint actin like Kevin Costner

Its remarkable wen, i put down sixteen bars

Try to step to dis n its gon leave a scar

Ain't nobody in da globe who can do it dis bizarre

Stupid n***az gettin played like ****** guitars

I never really cared about who you are

Cuz yo reign is over, jus like the czar's

Chorus

I ain't bangin, not a blood not a crip

I'm jus me n***a i aint no pimp

These n***az talkin these n***as jus wimps

N***az ain't focused, n***az jus skimp

Don't trip, lil n***a don't trip. (ayyy!)

Don't trip, lil n***a don't trip. (ayyy!)

Don't trip, lil n***a don't trip. (ayyy!)