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DIY Doc asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Is it Too late, or Too early?

As a youth I sat and endured all I could stand, reminding myself of a purpose

regarding PRO-nouns, and ANTI-verbs

but probably spent too much time dangling a participle.

My teacher looked better in the Flamenco dress I drew

defacing the cover of my book. $25 for this?

than that high neck, tight collar, Laura Engles Frock;

but she had pretty eyes, a smile to knock school boys from their seats

and it was an elective situation, so not everyone paid attention,

when she slipped into Argentinian, "CHICLE!, Donde Este?"

Then holding out her hand, walking the aisles, she slipped back

into, "Spit it now, and tell me where this Author is going."

I rarely knew, but chewed every day, just to have her take my gum.

I did learn a lot however, from Ms. Fuentes. Such things as I find delightful still,

like Rythmn, Rhyme, Not looking at the time,

but they were good times had by all that fall, in Creative Writing 101.

Update:

Thank you Autum, *Blush*; I like ME too.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    WOW!

    Too late, I think.

    Poetry? This looks more like a blog to me.

  • 1 decade ago

    I think this is a nice piece of prose. It flows from the beginning of a series of thoughts to the end; describing a nice little side trip story in good detail. I enjoyed it very much. It made it real to me without much,"fluff". Stay yummy!

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    1 decade ago

    OMG! It's wonderful to read some real genuine poetry on this site. Several have posted lately that are just exceptional, yours is one of them. I just got completely carried away in the story you were telling. I love it when I read someone's writing that takes me away like this.

    Thanks so much for sharing. I love this piece :O)

  • that really was exceptional. It's professional. The way it moves through time-- It's subtlety. I am blown away. the best thing I've read from these questions so far.

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