Considering expounding on the theme, any thoughts?

I'd like to see the whole doc, Doc ;)

*waiting*

It's something a little more original than I usually see on here. I'd suggest expanding on it a little more, see where it goes from there.

very interesting thought. i guess what it's trying to say is everything is not usually what it seems. sometimes when you think something is right, you might turn out extremely wrong...from your dreams to your nightmares...after they showed you what they could offer? wow!

short, yet, straight to the point...well done!

it real

Once had a dream that came true i was a star

But with much Power, comes responsibility to meet your duty..

I had no reason for turn my back when i was apart

from slavery, i choose to learn to be child in the hands of Family

hope It works ...

"amour"

Hope You don't mind me Copying your verse , to reflect upon in the future. xo

This is so funny!!! AW, don't do metaphors, unless they're funny.....we need humor morning, noon, and night.

What a good way to wake up...with a laugh!!! Good onyer!

Good Morning!

3 TDs!!! I'm excited! That much closer to a record # of TDs!!

Can't resist it! LOL! It's the wares they are hiding that you should be staring at. ha! ha! ha!

Very cute...This has not been my week and these are certainly brightening my day. Keep 'em coming :)