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I warned you a thousand times, I'm not afraid to fight back anymore...

I can't stand your angry screams, I can't take your hands around my throat, I can't handle these regretable tears I cry at night, I hate how you try to tear me apart from day to day even when your no where around...

Vengence flows through my faded veins tonight, in this broken home, you fight my mom, my heart is in my throat, as time becomes a time bomb impatiantly waiting to go off, words are spilt over the rim of my glass and I hold this heavy gun behind my back...

For all those times you touched me, for all those times you pushed me around, for all those times you threw words at my mother and hammered her into the wall like a nail, for all the things you've done to shake this family like a leaf on a tree, for all the times you've used us, just to throw us all away...

As you turn around I tighten my grip on this cold heartless gun, you stare at my mother with your wretched eyes and I feel like ripping you in half as you slam open your shiney new truck, I scream at you, my sister runs to her room crying...

The engine doesn't even cough as you violently start it, I hold this loaded gun, shaking it in my hand, i hold it to you, and this loaded gun becomes undone, my bullet tumbles out, propelling itself towards you, through the window it crashes, shattering the windsheild into a million shards...

Suddenly the engine roars and you peel out the drive way, glass quickly trailing behind, i cluth the shot gun in my hand and wander over to the hot bullet laying on the ground where your truck once was...

I shove it in my pocket and keep it there, waiting to see you again, because the next time I see you, your going to die...

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    It's stupid. Write something more uplifting

  • SiZe
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    For all those times you touched me, for all those times you pushed me

    i hold it to you, and this loaded gun becomes undone

    Those were the best 2 sentences, there was a lot of anger here towards the father or the mother's BF, but i never thought it will get to be with a gun, but u said next time you'll be dead, so he is still a live, believe me, he will see death without such a good family in the poem, that he didn't appreciate.

  • GiGi
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    sorry you are so hurt

    glad you let it out on paper

    "don't let anyone live rent free in your head"

    He is making you miserable even when he is not around you!

    Don't give him that power

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    :OO

    love this poem,lots of emotions.

    I give this a 10+++++

    this is great(:

    sad but great!

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  • 1 decade ago

    um... i think that you just put your experience into words.. but it's really nice...

    keep it up :)

  • 1 decade ago

    that's quite long

  • 1 decade ago

    i have no idea

    i hate poems

    they = gay

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Its amazing!!!!

  • 1 decade ago

    um... its interesting.....I guess...hehehe

  • 1 decade ago

    if you mean it, i think it's fab....

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