Car Banger or Ear Strangler? My Audio Track?

Ummm.. out of ten, I guess it can get a 2.4 or something like that.

Want to know why?

1) The only thing I actually can give you props on (I didn't listen to the whole ENTIRE thing, but most of it) was that you did stay very well on beat and didn't mess up and you have good control on your breathing.

2) The topic of the song sucked, and for it to be called, "I think she the one," and then you rap about some club-skank doesn't really sound right

3) The lyrics were really simple and plain and kind of like, close to being like nursury rhyme level. Y'know, just model and bottle, her and curves, etc. Can't you be more creative than that?

4) When you're a new rapper (or basically anyone not famous) you have to come with something better than what everyone else is rapping about, and you can't make yourself into something you're not. It just comes off as fake. I bet this isn't your only song, but it's the only one I've heard and it already just makes me say, "pff. yeah right ni66a,"

5) I didn't like the way your voice said, "i think she da one!" it sounded silly

6) that beat is the same azz spanish beat that's on every song. anything new?

7) i would never listen to this. but i don't think you're horrible. i think you just need to get your mind in the right place.

yeah.

Im sorry dude but you are no where near. Out of ten, being real - 1. You got a long way to go, sorry. Better to be honest.

Uhhh.. keep trying.