Your thoughts on my poem!?

I feel as though you're screaming it at someone...

I couldn't read more than five words just because it LOOKS annoying.

Forgive me, for I have no tact, but it is just plain awful. Not only is it in prose but it also is just boring, self-indulgent, and just plain bad. Sorry, I don't mean to sound rude, but you seriously need to improve. I think that probably putting it in proper format and using some of the elements of poetry (such as alliteration, metaphors and similes) could greatly improve it.

sounds to me like you know how to use your mind dear...this poem tells me you already know that you are a creator..and that what ever you create in your mind, happens....that is wonderful that you know this...not too many people do....your poem says a lot.. people on here read this poem for it is how you are suppose to be..you are your creator in your mind....what you tell your mind to do...it will respond..thank you for putting this poem on here. i hope everyone will read it and understand it... because you can solve any problem you are having by learning to control your mind....

I think your poem is like you are screaming at someone because you used only capital letters.

Sounds similar to something Shakespear would have said.

I am CrazyPlace ,I need to publish my own poem's if this is a seller.

My goodness ! I'm reading...trying to find the "poetic" part of it...still reading....

...self-indulgent.

But then...isn't all poetry?