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Kelsea R asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this poem?

Step 1

I lie

he steals

she is:

being lied to

and stolen from

he remains oblivious

Step 2

I get caught

he steals

she is

not trusting me

and being stolen from

he remains oblivious

step 3

I lie, again

He steals, again

she is:

stressing more

he remains oblivious

step 4

i get caught again

he gets caught

she gives up

he remains oblivious

step 5

I listen

He explains

she cries

he says nothing, still

What should be step 6

i explain

he lives

she calms herself

he heals.

The steps to where I'm currently at.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    That was pretty good, I like the idea of it/behind it. I liked it. Each part was to the point and concise with a little mystery

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