How should I end my essay?

Remember to start your essay with the same point as your ending.

For example, if you are saying it isn't a good idea to have uniforms then it has to be in the ending.

Maybe something like:

Besides basic education, one of the purposes of youth attending school is to grow and come into their own as confident individuals, ready to take on the world as adults. School uniforms hinders the development of that individual confidence by forcing the students into a cookie cutter world. I assert that allowing students a choice of clothing (with perhaps school guidelines) would foster a sense of responsibility, creativity and demonstrate that adults have confidence in our generation.

I would rewrite the penultimate sentence this way: All who were close and supportive of Thomas J, notably his mom and the others-with bodyguards in tow, witnessed his graduation ceremony. The final sentence: A seemingly simple event, This achievement proved that even the sky, has no limitations. I don't like to see parts of the same word used more than once in a sentence. Graduation and graduate are redundant. I don't know how the people listed are used in your essay, but I would bet that the reader would know who they are. Therefore, most of the names can be excluded.

Here's a good quote:

"A person in a uniform is merely an extension of another person's will."

American author Philip Slater

In school, I was taught that if I couldn't figure out what to say, to:

INTRO: Tell them what you're gonna tell them.

BODY: Tell them what you said you were gonna tell them.

CONCLUSION: Tell them what you told them.

Does that make sense?

We would have to read the actual essay to be able to tell you what to write. Just remember that the conclusion simply restates what the introduction says.

Take your first paragraph, and thesis statement, repeat and reword it, and then write. This is why uniforms should not be incorporated into schools.

they should have uniforms, then 12 year olds won't be dressed as some of their older idolizers

And with our uniforms in place we all lived happily ever after.

omg i had to do an essay about that too!

but that was last year

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and i cant remember how i ended my conclusion

hmm

Just state what you said using therefore

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=] Goodluck!

u should restate your major points.

you should use maybe a famous quote or just use ur own strong words.

"In conclusion, THE END."