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TINY asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

My poem!what do you think about it? I have this on you tube already.?

Angels Wing

I do believe the Lord above

Created you for me to love

He picks you out from all the rest

Because He knew I love you best.

I have a heart and it is true

Now it is gone from me to you

So care for it like what I do

For I don't have and you have two.

If in heaven and you are not there

I'll wait for you in the golden stairs

If you are not there on judgement day

I know you will come some other day.

So I'll return my angels wing

My golden lamp and everything

To prove to you my love is true

I ask the Lord I'll wait for you.

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  • JohnT
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    yes very nice and touching poem keep up the good work

  • 1 decade ago

    formatting is off a little but great poem though

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    OMG! AMAZING its really touching and sweet. I love it, i think you are really talented.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it's really touching...it's something just about everyone can relate to!

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