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Which story should i finish?
I wrote these beginnings looking at art. which one intrigues you enough that i should finish it?
Autumn Leaves J.E. Millas
She poured out the leaves from the basket with mournful eyes, sister and friend looking on. The sun set wetting the sky with oranges and yellows making a silhouette of the things before it. Little Mary’s face looked down and clutched an apple. The sadness in her eyes of something that had passed and isn’t to return next summer…
April Love Arthur Hughes
She clutched her thin shawl to her collar, her heart skipping beats. Was she excited? Was she afraid? She couldn’t tell. The on seen moon lit her frame and illuminated her dress and porcelain skin. Head turn she looked to the ground and saw the petals littering the ground. Ten she knew that her heart skipped for…
The Milkmaid, Vermeer
She looked down at the pouring milk. A distant thought in her mind, absent-mindedly she stopped the white stream with her finger a licked it. The sun was warm and pouring in the latticed window. While the woman looked out.
After the Shower, Grimshaw
The street was wet and she walked long and slow in its cobble. I walked a distance behind her. I did not know who she was and who I am doesn’t matter. The moons glow shone on the stone all around us and the promise of warmth and dryness shone from a house before us.
Alice C-I will read you story....
5 Answers
- Sambal OelekLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
"Little Mary’s face looked down and clutched an apple." Her face clutched an apple? Whoaa hand-face!
"The on seen moon" u.u
"While the woman looked out." What happened while she looked?
"I did not know who she was and who I am doesn’t matter." If you say this person doesn't matter, I have to agree with you.
I don't know if I want to know about any of the continuations of these. The emotions for each one seemed to be the same to me, as well.
- 1 decade ago
After the shower looks the most interesting. It has the scene, you can see that there is already character development with the comment 'who I am doesn't matter.' And what is the warmth and dryness? Where is it coming from? It a very good passage and I think you should finish the last one.
- 1 decade ago
To be truthful, I believe that you should finish all of them and make a book of short stories. Or at least combine them somehow and make a good story. I can't pick one over another.
P.S. This sounds like begging but, will you read a clip from a story I'm writing? The question is Can you read this please? I need anyone, and everyone's help.?
Please and thank you.
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