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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

May I offer this poème for critique?

Who? Moi?

She demonstrates wherewithal,

son poème de la roue tourne,

she shows the spoken shapes,

sur son voyage vers Mars

onboard a spiked chariot.

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  • Ambers
    1 decade ago
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    I don't speak French, but it sounds lovely

  • Jeff Jacob Lourie
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Pretentious, yet obfuscatory.

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