How can I describe myself on a job application?

I think that you can simply edit what you've posted here, then transfer it to your application. As one who has been in a position where I hired employees, choosing whom to interview after reading their applications and resumes, I would definitely be interested in talking with you based upon your autobiographical material. I think that you should eliminate the portion where you say that you're nice and honest, because your claims to those qualities are unprovable and will become recognizable when and if you are hired. Definitely include your interests/hobbies. If you are applying for a job where typing is a requisite, you might state exactly what your typing speed is. Describe your extracurricular clubs and their functions if those are not self-explanatory -- as you have for total image, for example. If you actually name the clubs, use capital letters for their first initials. Be careful of your grammar and spelling. It would be a good idea to make a rough draft of your intended material before actually committing it to the application, then have it proofread by someone capable of helping you make corrections. Good luck with achieving your job goal!