can someone please rate my pokemon team D/P?

1) replace salamence with dragonite. it has higher hp but doesn't have intimidate. keep the same moves though... maybe consider teaching it flamethrower/fire blast instead of hydro pump.

2) crobat is a phenominal choice... maybe take out a poison move and replace it with air cutter/aerial ace.

3) lapras isn't the best choice for a water pokemon but it's hp makes up for it's lack of speed. consider replacing bring with a normal move (body slam preferably) or another ice move.

4) good pokemon choice, good type choice for moves, but they're all power moves with low accuracy or disadvantages. earthquake is good but... maybe thunderbolt instead of thunder and then your set.

5) earthquake twice in a row is... unneeded. focus it on the electric attacks. very good choice with the flamethrower though

6) i myself have a gallade and here's its combination of moves...

dark slash

leaf blade

psycho cut

close combat

take out the earthquake and replace it with psycho cut. x-scossor should be replaced with dark slash. drain-punch and close combat focus on its fighting side, while it can be diverse but... theyre still both good moves.

overall, very strong team. you dont have to make my changes i know you were just asking for a rating but... aside from a little trim here and there its good. crobat and gallade especially. i also like the type changes with the electivire. it would throw a grass type enemy off guard.

on salamence, u can change thunderbolt into flamethrower

on crobat, change poison fang & cross poison b'cus u hav 3 poison attack, hav these attacks:fly/aerial ace, sludge bomb, confuse ray, shadow ball

on lapras, change hydro pump & brine b'cus if its battling a water type, all of its attacks is worthless especially in the battle tower, try these moves:ice beam, surf, body slam, thunder/confuse ray

nice rhyperior

nice electrivire

on gallade, change drain punch, x-scissor & earthquake into(if special sweeper)psychic, close combat, leaf blade & thunderbolt(if physical sweeper(close combat, leaf blade, psycho cut, slash or night slash

my original starting team had Torterra, Lucario, Luxray, and Staraptor too. If you want a really good team, I would replace Bonsly with Metagross or Sceptile because they are kick*** pokemon. I would also replace Blissy with Gastrodon because that was another one of my originals. Gastrodon comes in big time handy when you're battling the elite four.

Not to be mean or anything, but this team couldn't take out two pokemon on a true competitive team.

Your team is composed of a brand of pokemon called 'Sweepers', which are high attack pokemon with offensive-only moves.

You should visit a site called smogon.com to diversify your movesets.

Everything thing is good, but you should get rid of the sludge bomb