Opinion on a Collage I designed?

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I had just recently designed a collage that reflects my life, and I wanted to know what you guys though about it. It took me about 3 weeks to fully complete, and I was wondering if it would be a good piece to put into my portfolio for universities to look at (i'm going into Graphic Design). Also, what are your opinions on the other pieces of work I have done (I want your honest opinions so I can see where I can improve)

Here's the Collage: http://www.flickr.com/photos/22664449@N07/3225722455/sizes/o/

Other Work:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22664449@N07/3013161085/sizes/l/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22664449@N07/2916864402/sizes/o/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/22664449@N07/2627830677/sizes/l/

Mariah · Accepted Answer

The collage is very cool. I might make it less cluttered, but if it's what graphic design schools are looking for (I wouldn't know.), go for it. 
The Barbados poster is pretty cool, but the facts could be more compact, not so spread out over so many facets of the Barbados. I don't like the TV ad, it seems kind of amateurish. I love the Archives, awesome defined.

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