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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceHomework Help · 1 decade ago

Conclusion to an Essay [[With Intro]]?

okayy i need a Conclusion for an Essay..here's the Intro..

Requiring students to wear uniforms would solve a number of problems. First, psychologists have shown that students who dress neatly and attractively actually perform better in their classroom. Secondly, uniforms remove the stigma of children from poorer families who are not able to afford designer clothing. Thus the children from the well-to-do families who can afford designer clothes would not be seen as "Better off", placing all kids on a more or less equal basis

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  • boots
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    The fact that most school age children are adamant about not having uniforms should not be a consideration in deciding whether or not to impose this clothing regulation. children do not always know what is in their own best interest,and in this case, the benefits far outweigh the fact that uniforms are uniformly (on intended) disliked by the school kids.

  • 1 decade ago

    I won't tell you what to write, but here's how you write it:

    1. Rewrite your thesis

    2. Don't mention uniforms again, but instead talk about broad applications of some of the concepts you play off of, like, in this case social class.

    3. Make a vague prediction about the future.

    =)

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