Story!!! Email!!! Will someone Answer easy easy 10 points! promise?

I am writing a story and I need to know what someone thinks about it. The story is too long to put on here so can someone go to my profile, email me there email address and I will email you the story. PLease don't tell me to email you the story by Y!Answers because I done tried it is too long to email it on that too!

Background on the story:

A 17 year old girl got pregnant by her boyfriend. He left her to deal with the pregnancy by herself. She has a sister, which doesn't quite like her sister being pregnant at that age. She sorta rebels against it. Her mother helps her throught it.

The story isn't finished though.

I will try to get you the story by today, tomorrow or the next day!

Thanks.