are these sentences correct? (3 sentences)?

a) The students, EAGER TO ESCAPE THE HELL OF THEIR GRAMMAR LESSON, ran out of the classroom, AS NOISY AS A HERD OF STAMPEDING RHINOS, the moment the bell rang.

b) CONVICTED OF A CRIME HE DIDN'T COMMIT, he spent two years in Capuchino.

c) DISCOURAGED by the long hours and low pay, my sister finally quit her job.

hope that helps...

1. Yes

2. Yes.

3. Yes.

4. This is right too but it changes the focus. The first one makes the quitting the job more important. The second one makes your sister and the long hours more important. But they're both grammatically correct and mean the same.

They are all correct and I don't think the last sentence is any less effective than the second to last. They are both well-written. Good luck!

i like them! but C is a little eh.

i think it should be:

Discouraged by the long hours and low pay, my sister finally quit her job.

I think the first one should be "AS noisy as a ....etc."

The last one should have a period.

technically they are all correct. i suggest that you try to reword (a) better though and switching the clauses in (c)

A is right

B is wrong

C is right

D is right

To me they all sound fine! i could never come up with them! haha

No what type of questoon is that

Yep, all look good to me!