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New track... what do you think?
Me and my man Apocalypse did a track over a Das EFX beat and jacked their hook...
I'm on the first verse, he's on the second and the hook.
Anyone care to listen?
2 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
The lyrics were good, my only criticism on the lyrics (and i'm not hating it's just constructive criticism) is for this track mentioning das efx and pete for the beat is cool but other than that try not to name drop.
On the delivery, you should have Apocalypse speak up for the hook like he does in the second verse, because it sounded flat like he was just talking, have him put some finesse into it, or maybe you could do the hook.
- Catherine .Lv 41 decade ago
Great beat...))))) lyrics are cool and all that...
Like DITC I have some "pretensions" on that dude's rapping...he shouldve been do it more accurate,more natural-sounding(I mean the hooks)..
because it's a little evident that he had some emotions when he was rapping..