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Opinions on a song I wrote....?
Hey I was wondering if you guys could give me feedback on this song I wrote. I'm looking for opinions and stuff. Thanks
Title: My Farewell Song
I thought when you looked over your shoulder, it was true.
Guess I thought the only people existing were me and you.
And now you left me crying through the night,
Now you’re gone, there's no one to tell me it'll all be alright
and now I know
That I'm not okay,
anymore...
No more last ray
of hope to spear,
Anymore…
I was wishing for that moment,
Where all my dreams came true.
I woke up that morning
And I then suddenly found you.
My head was high in the clouds,
No one could bring me back the to the ground.
I was soaring so high but no,
The universe couldn’t let me be happy no more.
And now I know
That I'm not okay,
anymore...
No more last ray
of hope to spear,
Anymore…
Why did you keep me waiting?
Why did you leave me hating?
Why did you think it would all be ok the day that you left me?
‘Cause friends drift apart slightly
Leaving no room for any pain,
Leaving all of their love in vain, in vain…
And then I thought
That I wasn’t okay,
anymore...
No more last ray
of hope to spear,
Anymore.
But now I know, that even though I miss you dearly, that I will forgive you in time.
Leaving no more room for excuses, that kept corrupting my mind.
So now all I have to say is farewell and goodbye to you.
It’s been a great pleasure meeting you.
Farewell…
Yea.. I should probably copyright it... Well it's MINE. yamagirl13's song!!! Yea.. I have no idea how to copyright XD
13 Answers
- Anonymous5 years ago
I know it sucks, but when a woman is done with you, she's done. Writing a great song for her only accomplishes one thing... it gives her even more power over you, and something she can laugh and brag about to her girlfriends- OH and dont forget, she will be dogging you about it to her next boyfriend talking about how you are such a loser that you would do anything for her. Trust me, a woman who is gone- is gone for good. Unless your song gets famous- then she will want you back- youd be an azz to take her back then because it isnt you she wants, its your fame. ***** shoulda recognized u for who you were before, not what you bring her now.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
great but when i was reading it i put a rhythm to it and i thought that in the first verse it would flow better if it went
i thought when you looked over your shoulder, it was true.
Guess I thought the only people existing were me and you.
now you left me crying ,
you’re gone it won't all be alright
- 1 decade ago
not trying to be mean, but the lyrics are cheesy and forced
song lyrics must flow through you like water
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- 1 decade ago
its okay... but probably not a good idea to put one of ur own songs on here cause someone could clame it and call it theirs
- Anonymous1 decade ago
this sounds like a song that has ben already written
- Anonymous1 decade ago
wow thats really good! lol keep at it!
- Anonymous1 decade ago
wow its really good natural songwriter :)
