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plz tell me howz this so far.........?

plz tell me how u like this...u can give ur comments bout it,,,and plz do suggest a title also

thanks all...

FIRE AND THE ICE

Times of India May 24th 2008

SHANAYA MATHUR ON VACCATION!!

Shilpa Jindal, TNN

Shanaya Mathur has decided to take a break from bollywood, as work was taking a toll over her health. Shanaya, reportedly, has left for an undisclosed location earlier this week. The actress has been signed for the big budget film by director John Fernandez. The film reportedly has a huge budget and is said to have a big star cast too.

Shanaya Mathur is not being accompanied, on her vacation, by her current beau, business tycoon, Nikhil Malhotra. They have been dating for nearly about 1 year now.

Both of them were unable for a comment.

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May 24th, Sweet Home supermarket

Well, I should have known why the weird guy with big glasses was staring at me.

But I chose to not pay any notice to him. I tried to ignore him ,and pretend everything was normal.Yeah,what could be more normal than standing in the check outline of a supermarket, with a weird guy staring at you?...normal ,yeah…..NOT!!

He came up to me and tapped my shoulder and said kind of nervously “umm...Are u…are u….?”

I closed my eyes tightly, fruitlessly hoping that he would just go away.

“Are you...Shanaya Mathur?”He managed to stammer.

Aaaarrgghhhh!!!!!!

I turned back and with clenched teeth

“No, I m not Shanaya Mathur” I managed to say calmly.

“Oh, sorry…but you do look like her.” he finished sheepishly and went away.

I shook my head and waited for the line to proceed. Soon my chance came and I paid the bill and got out of the supermarket before anybody else comes up to me and ask me if I was Shanaya Mathur! I checked my watch; it was 4; 00pm.

I was late and I knew Ria would probably kill me but I couldn’t help it if the traffic was this slow.

I was still a little bit annoyed with that weird guy at the supermarket.

Let me clear this now…. I am not Shanaya Mathur!

I am Tanya Sharma. I live with my sister in Delhi. I am an art teacher at St.Joseph and Mary public school. See, normal.

As I was stuck in the traffic, a little boy, knocked on my car window, “madam…read the latest news….buy Times of India…..Shanaya Mathur takes a vacation!” the boy shouted.

Great! So this shanaya mathur again!!!!

I bought the newspaper from him and took out the supplement from it. I wanted to check if there were any new movies on theater that week, as I knew that this might cool Ria’s anger at me being late.

But oh no!

“SHANAYA MATHUR ON VACCATION!!”Shouted the front page of the newspaper supplement.

There was an article, which was accompanied by a photo of Shanaya Mathur coming out of a restaurant, shying away from media. She was holding hands with her current boyfriend, Nikhil Malhotra. They both did make a good couple. Shanaya was wearing a pale blue summer dress with white sandals while Nikhil was in a black polo shirt and blue denim jeans, looking really hot.

God!!!!!

What is wrong with me???

I looked down at my white shirt, with creases, and faded denim jeans.

Difference no 1: Shanaya Mathur has a better dressing sense than me.

Difference no 2: Shanaya Mathur has such a hot boyfriend

Difference no 3: Shanaya Mathur is way prettier than me!

Well, I can go on forever!

OK so most people won’t agree with difference no. 3 as according to most people I look like Shanaya Mathur.

I looked at Shanaya’s picture closely.

OK so we did look a little bit same. I mean we’ve both got straight, dark brown hair. We both are tall and slim. But Shanaya has deep brown eyes and not plain black like me.

We do look similar but we are NOT same!

I reached Ria’s house, dreading her temper as I was terribly late for lunch.

I rang the doorbell and waited for the worse. I heard Ria coming up to the door to open it.

“Oh you are home” Ria said sweetly.

Huh!

“Umm…..Ria I am sorry I am late…it was the traffic. It was really bad!” I told her, as soon as she had opened the door.

“That’s alright, sweetey” she said in a sugary voice.

Sweetey???????????.........boy! I am in huge trouble!

“Come on in, dear” she said.

I stepped inside the house nervously, as Ria was standing right behind me.

Update:

its still not complete,,but wot happens is that now tht actress has gone missing and she is mistaken as shanaya mathur

Update 2:

by she i mean tanya is mistaken for shanaya

Update 3:

i appreciate tht u read and judged my story ladymillybay...but the thing is if i write the whole idea here then it wont remain a secret

thnx silhoutte,,,,i truly appreciate ur judgement

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  • 1 decade ago
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    It's certainly a very interesting story and I quite enjoyed it. The idea of Bollywood and India is certainly something new and exciting, to myself, and I think that this could be a very good story if you continue it.

    You could improve it by making sure it isn't so exaggerated. In formal literature, you only use on exclamation mark instead of "!!!!!" and it's the same with question marks, rather than "????????".

    But other than that, it's really interesting! I look forward to reading more if you post more ;-) .

  • 1 decade ago

    eh, im not gone on the idea - firstly where are you going to go with the story? Also, the idea is a little over done.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    horrible.

    Source(s): good day.
  • 1 decade ago

    hmmmnnngggg......

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