i joined a creative writing group last week what do you think of the 1st thing i wrote?

i think it's very good!

keep working hard!

you could just use commas in a few spaces and stuff like so!

but other than that! i could totally understand!

(was it about a school classroom?)

As a writer, I like the description used and it certainly shows promise! However, you can't judge talent based on a paragraph there has to be more information for people to go on. Ignore all negative comments and if you want to write and it is within you; you will write! To be a writer, it comes from inside not anyone else!

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If you're still a teen, or English is your second language--you've got a lot of grammar and punctuation issues, but that's something you still have time to learn. The actual content isn't bad.

If you're over 21--who let you graduate high school?

If you re-read what you've written and can find all of the mistakes, you are not wasting your time, but you've wasted mine. Proofread before you post!

Your grammar needs some improvement, but i think you're off to a good start. You just need to keep at it, and your skills will improve. Don't give up so easily. Writing is something you gotta keep at, and for a very long time. Do you think any of your favorite writer's got anywhere by giving up?

My opinion, as a "professional" bookworm (yeah, I read a lot. And I mean a lot), is that you have talent. It's a wonderful beginning, not revealing a lot, but enough to get you interested.

However, please be careful of grammar and spelling, as that really annoys readers. Especially if it's in published books (I mean, how incompetent can the editor get??? Seriously)

It does seem to have a poetic feel to it. I love the imagery. You have me intrigued. I really hope that I can read the rest of it.

It has a very visual description. Everyone can improve if they know it or not. It could seem like a longshot but everyone finds things that are good and passionate about. Good luck with your writing.

I LOVE IT. its so simple, yet it portrays your your thoughts an emotions, a sort of calmness. I can tell your talking about being with your creative writing group. Very good!

Ummmm no, I don't care if I s**k (which you don't) I still write, you can only get better, so no don't give up, I'm just confused by your poem but I do like the 2nd line. :D

Ooh, I like it alot.

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