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What do you guys think of my poem so far?

On April 23, 1564,

John and Mary Shakespeare had their first son.

His name was William, his work we adore.

He wrote many plays... 36 + 1.

What lovely words shakepeare was known to write;

his work is still admired to this day

He wrote of beauty and love at first sight

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    cool

  • 5 years ago

    i like it! it could not be greater appropriate for my existence genuine now! there is not something i might exchange! i provide it a 9.5/10 inspect a number of my different poems I even have at here merely click on my call and ull discover them =]

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Try to do something with the last two sentences.. they don't flow.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    This is a very clever poem and I like it.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Claps*

    Thank you

    thank you

    Source(s): Naa it was pretty good
  • 1 decade ago

    it sounds to much like your listing info... not a good subject to right about. hate to break it to you

  • 1 decade ago

    im guesing this is homework or somthng. lol

    but yea it is a good poem.

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