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? asked in Pregnancy & ParentingAdolescent · 1 decade ago

Do you like the song i wrote?

I’m preparing to fall

Either in love or apart

Oh but who could have foresaw

You breaking my heart

Oh you were just waiting on a cue

To break me but I’m no victim

Cause I don’t love you

And you’re just plain dumb

I’m preparing to fall

Either in love or apart

Oh but who could have foresaw

You breaking my heart

But don’t worry I’m fine

You never meant much

I’ll drop you like a dime

And use you like a crutch

Oh I’m trying to heal

My own self doubt

And this relationship is nothing real

Nothing to talk about

Yeah You’ve lost all of your appeal

Now I’m finding my way out

I’m preparing to fall

Either in love or apart

Oh but who could have foresaw

You breaking my heart

But don’t worry I’m fine

You never meant much

I’ll drop you like a dime

And use you like a crutch

Cause honey lets face it

I’m way more screwed up than you thought

But I’m not a half wit

And I can’t be bought

Oh and I’m preparing to fall

Either in love or apart

This is copy righted so please don't steal. I know this is probably in the wrong section but i wanted to see what teenagers thought.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    this is superrrrr good! I love the first two lines! its really good. and you do NOT say oh too much.... i dont know what they're talking about.

  • You don't say oh TOO much.

    I loved it!!! =)

    i would take out maybe one of the ohs

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    personally i loved it :) its basically the story of my life atm . hmm im curious wha the beat of it it.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    you say oh too much

    it's okay

    i wish i'd knew how th beat went

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  • 1 decade ago

    you're repeating things over and over again.

    it's way too cliche.

    i've heard songs like these soo many times

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Ita ok

  • 1 decade ago

    Story of my life. :)

    It's cool.

  • Jamie.
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Oh, Oh ,Oh.

    It's alright.

    :D

    -Jamie(:

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