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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 1 decade ago

Good story title for my story?

What would be a good story title for this story?

Once upon a time there was a beautiful castle in the enchanted town of Enchanta. All of the town’s citizens were very happy because all the food that they wanted was grown on trees. There were breads, vegetables, fruits, meats, dairy and even water grew on trees which is why they never needed any money.

Since all of their food was grown on trees they decided that they needed a queen suited for such a beautiful place. They decided to have an audition in their town house to find the perfect queen.

There were going to be three judges. One was the town mayor, Mr. Fumble. Next was Mrs. Clever which was the wisest in all the land. And last but not least was Grandma Cookie who was the nicest lady you would ever meet. They sat down in the town house and Mr. Fumble announced, “Let the auditions begin!”

First came in a tall and skinny lady with the longest dress anyone had ever seen. She spoke, “MY NAME IS PETUNIA AND I DEMAND THAT I BECOME QUEEN THIS INSTANT!” The judges gave her a terrified look and Grandma Cookie asked “Tell me dear, do you eat often?” and Petunia quickly said no. After a discussion in between the judges they said no and she stomped her high heeled shoe and left.

Next came in a short and shy looking lady. She just stood there without saying a word. Mrs. Clever asked, “do you eat a lot of food?” The lady looked down at her feet and didn’t answer. Again, Mrs. Clever asked, “do you eat a lot of food?” And, she didn’t answer. After a while of just staring at her she went up to Mr. Fumble , whispered in his ear and left. He spoke out and said “she told me that she didn’t eat a lot of food and also, sorry that she wasted our time.” The judges let out a sigh.

All day came in women of all ages and none of them said that they ate a lot.

They were beginning to think that they would never find the queen they were looking for until they heard a knock on the door. Grandma Cookie opened the door and they saw her. The hungriest person that they had ever seen!

As she came in she was eating a piece of chocolate. Mrs. Clever gave Mr. Fumble a look of satisfaction. The lady began to speak “Hello, my name is Michelle and besides the fact that I have lived in Enchanta my whole life I am a great leader.” Mrs. Clever knew the question she was about to ask. “Michelle, do you eat a lot?” she asked in a determined voice. Michelle thought for a moment and exclaimed “YES!” The judges liked where this was going. Mrs. Clever continued, “How much on a scale of one to ten would you say you love food?” This time Michelle didn’t have to think about it and immediately said “10!”

The judges knew that they had found their queen! They told Michelle (now known as Queen Michelle) the good news and she couldn’t be happier.

About a month later everyone had learned to like their new queen, Queen Michelle and she had learned to like her people.

And they all ate happily ever after…Well except for Petunia!

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And maybe even if you had some suggestions to improve the story?

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    The Eat-Alot Queen

    Enchanta

    um...it could have more description of the characters......and more about how the judges went off to talk about who the queen should be...and have another woman compete with Michelle because it'd make it more interesting

  • 1 decade ago

    Quest for Digestion

    Digesting Democracy

    Eating Enchanta

    Quest for Gluttony

    The Irony of Eating

    Queen of the Gluttons

    Eating Her Way to the Top

    Enchanta

    Pompous

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that was a pretty good story, some titles are: auditions for the queen, the queen for enchanta, enchanta, Enchantas queen, Queen Michelle, For the love of food, luv of food. i think the story is great and that you shouldnt change anything im guessing that this for school so, hope u get an A !!!

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  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    She's clearly afraid of the dolls, which are harmless and she seems superstitious. Does she go in the basement, anyway? Does she eventually overcome her fear? Is this story to be entered into a contest, I hope? One title idea is The Eyes At Grandma's.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Innocent Hunger?

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

    The Queen Project

  • 1 decade ago

    How about something witty like "Quest for a Queen" or something nice and short like "Enchanta".

  • 1 decade ago

    Enchanted

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