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What do you think of this painting?

I did it and I honestly don't think it's that great. It won 1st place in an art show and my art teacher loved it and said it was 'different'.

I like the clouds and birds and that's about it.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/40831482@N07/

What do you think of it?

P.S. This is the third time I post this question because I kept messing up the link. Hopefully it works this time!

Update:

I read it in the last one BarbaroLva! Thanks!

And this was my first painting ever so any criticism is appreciated.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Congratulations on your 1st place win!

    I remember making a model of the our solar system that won 1st palce and it was awesome.

    Affirmations:

    I like the birds a lot as well. I like that it is a simple painting. I hope that you don't "simple" in the wrong way. What I mean is that it is very pleasant to look at, and I think that is what I like about it most of all. I get several feelings when I look at it. I get a sense of the openness of the space that you painted this image from. I also feel loneliness. The birds being the only life in the image brings that out I think. I get a good sense of movement from them and they seem very real.

    Questions:

    Where is this painting of? Is it a rendering of place that you know or is this out of your imagination?

    Critique:

    I would like to see more color and more color variation. I think that was the only thing that I felt that I wanted more out the picture. Like I said, I really enjoy that this painting evoked several feelings, and I think that more vibrant colors would have gave just a little push. I just want to say that my comments on color are just my tastes and what I like to see. I think that art is different to everyone and peoples preferences will change with every one that you ask.

    All and all, I like your painting. Good Job! Enjoy that 1st place. you said that this was your first painting and I hope that it isn't your last

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i like it..its very good for your first painting. i like the clouds and the birds too. i would have liked if you showed more detail. i agree with your art teacher, it is different. but in a good way :)

  • 1 decade ago

    I love how you did your clouds :) tho you could blend the colors a little more >.<

    Source(s): my art class
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like the way you've done the shadows and how they rather dominate things.

    Lame watercolors:

    http://goneglobal35.com/watercolors.html

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  • 1 decade ago

    I answered on your other question, if you want to take a look. Let me know if you want me to re-post it here!

  • 1 decade ago

    I don't know how old you are, so I'm not sure. :)

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