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i am new,so i need help..?

well..emm..i've been asked to write a poem for the title " i'll be sweet forever"..it was for my class competition..the description is:

" Write a poem with title 'i'll be sweet forever' as you are going to give the poem to your loved one for his birthday present.. just do it as you like..

i really need helps..thx..

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Here's an example. You can use I don't care.

    Each person lines up,

    Each ready to give you a gift.

    I am last in line,

    But I await my turn happily.

    As I have the best gift of all

    No amount of money can add up to this gift,

    Not even the richest of the rich can buy you this.

    The line moves up and i move with it.

    I still wait the smile never leaves my face

    This is a gift much greater than anything.

    When it reaches my turn I give you your gift,

    Smile and say something very simple.

    I'll be sweet forever....

    Its is free verse. And the gift is your love. Oh and if you use it it won't hurt to add a girl named 'Adrianna helped you. ;) Jk you can take full creidt.

  • 1 decade ago

    My love; my love

    My cute handsome dove

    You're an A+; placed high above

    You're who I'm thinking of

    Your strength; your style

    Your charming profile

    Let's walk down the aisle

    I will be faithful

    I am so grateful

    As long as you're here, I won't be hateful

    You make life simple

    Your smile; each dimple

    Our bond; we'll cherish

    Till the day we perish

    You're my hot dog, but without relish

    I would cry for you

    I would die for you

    I'll never lie to you

    I'll always try for you

    To say good bye to you

    Will never come true

    Like 2+2, 4-ever I'll be sweet to you

    Source(s): I hope this helps
  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    ' I'll be sweet forever'

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    I'll be sweet forever;....forget about you? Never!

    be beside you...confide in you too,

    and forever I 'll always stay sweet for you.

    A sweeter love would be hard to find,

    because it's you always on my mind,

    and when I think of sweet love and devotion,

    it fills me up with thoughts filled with emotion

    and the sweeter the love, the better the present,

    so I'll be sweet forever...and you'll find no better!

    Happy birthday...........with love thats forever..!

    hope this helps some, or gives you maybe an idea. Good Luck.

  • 1 decade ago

    compare your love with someone refilling one of those big glass sugar containers at restaurants. That would nt be too mopey, it would be funny, and awesome

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