I need an awesome introduction for a sad story.?

This was tearing me apart inside. My father had been transferred to another country. It was wonderful for him. It meant more money and a better life for the family, but for me it was the most horrible thing that had ever happened.

My best friend, my only real friend, tried to keep up with the vehicle as it sped away. I leaned out the open window of the car as far as I dared to hear her words. She was begging me to come back to her some day. "I will wait for you forever!" She cried with tears streaking her face.

"Some how, some day, I will come back. I will never forget you!" I yelled, but soon we turned and I could no longer see her.

I pulled back inside and sat down. "I will never forget you or the promise I made." I mumbled to myself. Boys are supposed to be strong... No emotions... I turned my face into the car seat and began to cry.

"Beep Beep" the car honked twice making me jump. I didn't turn though, i didn't acknowledge it was there.

"I have to go" I whispered to Rose (didn't say the names so I'm just making up names).

"No" she whispered back to me, her tiny hand tightening around mine.

Then she started crying, and I felt hot tears start to come to the surface of my own.

I mumbled goodbye, and got into the car.

I didn't want to turn around, but i had to.

When i did i saw rose running after the car.

"Remember!" she screamed. "Remember our promise! Never Forget it! Don't you ever forget it!"

I lost my control after that. I jumped up and went to open the car door, but then somebody grabbed me and pulled me back before i could get out of the car. Before i could shout to her a real goodbye. Before i could tell her that no matter what i could never forget the promise we made. Never.

Sorry not that great. But why don't you write your OWN story!

My best friend ran after me, tears on her face.

"Don't forget me!" She shouted. "Don't forget your promise!"

As the old car trundled down the highway I stuck my head out of the window. "I won't!"

"And one more thing!"

"What's that?"

"Write your own bleeping story, don't get other people to do it for you. That's lame!"

You shouldn't insult people when they're trying to help you.

About the story, I'm sure your brother will be satisfied with how your writing it.

That's not actually correct