My book report spelling check please!!!!?

ahaerkllr <-------------- That's me banging my head on the keyboard.

Everything is so hard to read. I really can't find one sentence which is perfect.

Your spelling seems fairly good, but your grammer and syntax is appalling. I'm not joking.

Even once I finish my edited version it still won't make much sense because I haven't read the book 'Invisible'.

Also it is evident you copied some parts from this website: http://www.nimblespirit.com/html/invisible_review....

If you copy it’s called plagiarism which is not a minor offence. At least credit it or change it to your own words.

Also you spelt his name wrong half the time. Which makes it even more obvious you copied.

Here it is:

Some of the most important facts that I learnt from the book, Invisible is what your body does to you when you lose someone you love, care, protect or is your best friend. Also other people look at you differently, because of something that happened. You see him talk, but others don’t. You become obsessed; you feel like you don’t fit in with other people. They think you’re a creep, freak, strange, uncanny. Everyone thinks you’re crazy and people don’t really know you.

The author’s purpose is in how many different ways losing someone can really affect you. Then the hardest part is you feel invisible, like you’re not there, and it makes you think that you are really the only person who sees this. You wonder what people are talking about. But it’s so hard to talk about it because you don’t want to believe it.

The strengths of the main character Douglas are that he seems very strong and smart because he knows exactly what he’s doing and even though it may not be right he acts with his heart, and does it anyway.

One of the weaknesses I found was, Douglas was so scared to stand up for himself and always depended on his best friend, Andy. Who were very close and I found that it affected Douglas greatly. One of sentence that was repeated over and over again throughout, Invisible was on page 149.

‘“Are you really here? Sure I am.’”

‘“You were really there all the time, weren’t you?”’

‘“You’re my best friend. I’ll never leave you”’

This part to me was very interesting and its makes you think so much. All the vague hints they give you, but you don’t ever find the right answer to it.

A seventeen-year-old boy who thinks of himself as “pretty much invisible” Douglas MacArthur Hanson is the narrator of this appealing and ultimately breathtaking novel. He speaks of his passions, his quirks, his “invisibility,” his best friend Andy Morrow, with reasonable self-assurance. He seems to be a self-aware geek who is satisfied with himself and his interests. As the novel progresses, Douglas’s behavior grows increasingly edgy, and despite his ability to tell his story as if there is nothing unusual about it, we begin to sense that underneath his outward behavior something very profound and perhaps dangerous is going on. He is, after all, seventeen. What boy of that age could experience the rejection and scorn that he does without being somehow injured despite his outward show of confidence?

Enjoy what took me almost an hour.

Some of the most important facts that I learned from the book are, what your body does to you when you lose somebody that you love, care, protect, and is your best friend, also (never begin a sentence with also, and, so, because. These are conjunction words and link two sentences together into one sentence. You need to find another way to start this sentence) to other people, who look at you differently, because of something that has happened but you can’t believe and don’t ever think he's gone you see him, talk, but others don’t. You become so obsessed with random things, you feel like you don’t fit in with other people, they think you a creep, freak, ant etc. Everybody things your crazy, creek, and people don’t really know you. The author’s purpose is in how many different ways losing somebody can really affect you, (You also can't start a sentence with then you need to find another way to put this) the Hardies (I'm guessing the Hardies is the name of something like a group so therefore it needs a capital because it's the name of something) part is you feel invisible like your not there, and makes you think I’m really the only person who sees this, what are people talking about? I don’t remember any of it. But (Again change sentence structure a sentence can't be started with the word but) its so hard to talk about it because you don’t want to believe it. So (Again change the sentence, you can't start a sentence with "so") the purpose is your brain makes you think so many crazy stuff (things or thoughts might sound better) but it’s so hard for you to understand what’s going on, and how it happened. The strengths of the main character Dougles (Are you sure its not spelt Douglas?) are that he seems very strong, and smart because he knows exactly what he's/he is doing and it's (you're obviously meaning it is so it needs an apostrophe) not right but he does it anyway (anyways isn't a word no matter how awesome it is). One of the weaknesses I found was, he was so scared to stand up for himself, he always depended on his best friend, Andy (Tip: Try not using one word e.g. "He" too much, try to use other alternatives such as the character's name. It makes it a little less repetitive to read, not that I'm saying this is repetitive or anything). They did everything together so that was one of the weakness I found in the book and it really affected Dougles, because he was always, always looking for Andy. One of the sentences that was repeated over and over again. It was really interesting and it makes it really good since when you read the book, it was on page 149. “…Are you really here, Sure I am” “ You were really there all the time, weren’t you?” “ You’re my best friend. I’ll never leave you”. This part to me was very interesting and it makes you think so much about all the little hints they give you, but you don’t really find the right answer to it. A seventeen-year-old boy who thinks of himself as “pretty much invisible” Douglas MacArthur Hanson is the narrator of this appealing and ultimately breathtaking novel. He speaks of his passions, his quirks, his “invisibility,” his best friend Andy Morrow, with reasonable self-assurance. He seems to be a self-aware geek who is satisfied with himself and his interests. As the novel progresses, Douglas’ (If the word ends with S to begin with you don't need to add an extra S after the apostrophe) behavior grows increasingly edgy, and despite his ability to tell his story as if there is nothing unusual about it, we begin to sense that underneath his outward behavior something very profound and perhaps dangerous is going on. He is, after all, seventeen. What boy of that age could experience the rejection and scorn that he does without being somehow injured despite his outward show of confidence?

All in all it was very good I especially liked the writing there a jsut a few grammatical errors that you need to fix it up.

Oh my!

First of all, even before the spelling check, please break your report into readable paragraphs.

There should be one paragraph for every idea. A dialogue should also be separated into its own paragraph.

There are problems with punctuation and sentence structure, as well.

I will just do the first few sentences with the corrections in ellipses.

(One) of the most important facts that I learned from the book (is)(:) what your body does to you when you lose somebody that you loved, cared (for), protect(ed), and (was) your best friend.

(One because "what your body does to you" is just one thing. Loved, cared for, protected, was because it's the past; he's gone)

Also to other people look at you differently, because of something that happened but you can’t believed and don’t ever thing his gone you see him, talk, but others don’t.

(This sentence makes no sense - read it out loud, word for word.)

You become so obsessed with random things, you feel like you don’t fit in with other people(.) (T)hey think you (are) a creep, (a) freak, (an) ant (ant?)(,)etc.

(I don't know what you mean by people think you're an ant. ???)

Everybody (thinks) (you''re) crazy, creek (creek? Like a river?), and people don’t really know you.

(Why would people think you're a creek? In addition to that, this part is just a continuation of the last. It's redundant.)

Those are just the first parts. The rest really need a lot of work.

It also seems like you copied someone's (professional) review in some of the parts. Your teacher will definitely be able to tell the difference between your writing and the professional reviewer's.

I read your report and it sounds very interesting, what is the title of the book? Have me now curious, lol. I will have to come back to this as I am busy at the moment, but great proof reader. Email me title won't you? lamaggiore@yahoo.com, thanks so much.