When you say 'It's a ******** image' is the word spitting or splitting?

spitting

Hey, Silly Turtle! I would also suggest to make the sentences flow a little more. Now for this part: "There was nothing for a split second, no world, and no thoughts, but everything came spinning back." I just feel like it was super rushed. You give the reader the sense that there is nothing and then snap! Oh, it's back to normal. That sentence almost seems unnecessary then. What was the point? If you are going to leave that, I would suggest to put a little more detail so the reader can truly imagine and sink themselves in it. Other than that, I loved it! Happy New Year to you as well! A new year = a new perspective on writing

Spitting

Actually it's "spit AND image" but usually said as spitting image.

spitting image- guess you too young to remember the dodgy '80's puppet show...

Spitting ,as in "they are so alike he could have spat him out"

i think its actually spitting

but loads of people make it sound like splitting

splitting. lol. with the L.

spitting

no l

splitting defo