Would this be a good story?

A girl is living alone with two younger brothers and a drunk father

Her mother abandoned them when they were younger, like when the girl was second grade

The gril takes good care of her brother and father though and works hard each and everyday after they left

She hates the mother for leaving them in their crisis and hurting her father

Then, she gets transfered to anther school because of difficulties in her own school

The whole grade gets transfered to another school that soon the girl figured out was where her mother was visiting

Afterthe meeting she goes on a journey with other people her age because there was a war going on

Between her own kind and she needed to help with it

Or else she could never get back to her brothers and her father

The mother and her new husband forces her to do so

Becasue they knew who she really was and had let her have her freedom for as long as she could

So, they go on a hourney through some parts of the lands

Where many don't venture and try to learn as much skills as they could based on experience

There's more to it, but I think I'll end it there.