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What do you think of this short story I wrote?
We're writing myths in English class and I just wanted an honest opinion of my story.
Once there was a little butterfly named Alice who loved to cook. One day, Alice decided to start selling one of her favorite recipes she created, which was nectar pudding. Soon, all of the other butterflies had Alice's recipe for nectar pudding, so the town of Azalea decided to have a nectar pudding cook-off, to see who made nectar pudding the best.
Alice was one of the judges. Each one of the participants made the nectar pudding on a flower. Back in those days, flowers did not have nectar in them, until the day of the cook-off. The ingredients were already prepared and laid out for the participants. But the butterfly in charge of the cook-off had to substitute one of the ingredients. While the butterflies were making the nectar pudding, the substitution had a chemical reaction with the nectar, and nectar splattered all over all of the flowers!
So now, if you see a butterfly collecting nectar, they are cleaning up the mess they made at the nectar pudding cook-off. Butterflies are very polite and clean up after themselves, so don't shoo them away for going all over your garden. Only shoo away the moths, because they don't clean up after themselves, but that is a completely different story.
THE END
4 Answers
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
I like it. It's very cute and I think you'll get an A or B
- 1 decade ago
Aw! That's cute! I can just see a little butterfly cleaning up a big mess =D
I don't understand why they had to substitute an ingredient.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
It's really sweeettt! xxx