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To those who enjoy teen romance stories!?

Hi, I'm writing a *romance* story, I suppose, and I'm kind of stuck.

There's three chapters, and the link below is to chapter one. If you want to keep reading, there's a 'next chapter' tab at the bottom of the writing. Ignore the tenses.

Please give me feedback on it ESPECIALLY on what you think will happen next, what you want to happen next, what you think should happen next, etc.

thank you!!! (:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/SabrinaDanielle...

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I only read up to where Emily is about to go into Mitchell's room, sorry. I have to finish it soon. BUT, it's really really good. I enjoyed it and definitely can't wait to read more. :)

    OH MY GOODNESS!!

    I just finished it and i just have to say that i am hooked! Plea please please right more soon. :)

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