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Is this a comma splice? Capitalization correct? Grammar help.?

Is this a comma splice?

"I was never deemed a genius, nor was I ever picked to become a part of my high school’s upper crest."

Does "mecca" need to be capitalized in this sentence?

"It was such a relief to escape from the closed boxes of Calvert County, and be released into a world that so many had proclaimed to be a mecca for misfits."

In this sentence, is "ensemble" spelled correct, as in an outfit?

"The guy would have impressed even Willy Wonka with his bright green and yellow ensemble. "

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  • Miz T
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Are you looking for all errors in those sentences or just the ones you mention?

    "I was never deemed a genius, nor was I ever picked to become a part of my high school’s upper crest." "Crest" should be "crust."

    "It was such a relief to escape from the closed boxes of Calvert County, and be released into a world that so many had proclaimed to be a mecca for misfits." No comma necessary.

    "The guy would have impressed even Willy Wonka with his bright green and yellow ensemble." The adjectives require punctuation: "bright green-and-yellow ensemble" or "bright-green and yellow ensemble," as you prefer the colors to be.

  • 1 decade ago

    1. Looks good to me.

    2. Absolutely correct, the mecca you are discussing is a generic, not the city.

    3. According to my dictionary it is spelled correctly. One definition is coordinated outfit as in a costume.

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