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Grammar help. Commas? Correct Punctuation?
Does this sentence need to be rearranged?
"As she pivoted around me, I knew she must be practicing for The New York Ballet Company. "
Does this sentence need to be rearranged?
"This trip introduced me to a broad, more open view of the world, and instilled in me an appreciation for the differences in everyone of us"
Does this sentence, need additional punctuation?
"But now I know that labels do not define me."
6 Answers
- momomoLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
The first is fine.
The second - either use 'every one of us,' or 'each of us.'
The third is fine.
- 1 decade ago
The first one is fine.
"This trip introduced me to a broad, more open view of the world and instilled in me an appreciation for the differences in everyone of us"
The third one is also fine.
- RoofingPrincessLv 71 decade ago
The first two look fine to me.
The third looks like a sentence fragment; what thought precedes "but"?
- benedettaLv 45 years ago
Use "who" (the girl is the situation). i might do away with "i might think of that," as a results of fact it makes the sentence seem indecisive and wordy (although, it is not incorrect to apply it). do no longer use a semicolon except there is one complete sentence on the two factor of it; subsequently, including the semicolon might require you to function "she is" till now "one" (which you're able to do, although this is effective with basically a comma). stable success!
