Do you like my poem???

ok so I wrote this poem about someone I know. tell me if you like it and what the title can be :

I love the way his laughs aren't really laughs at all

They are like whispers of laughs and you can see his utmost compassion for anyone and anything

His undying loyalty to his father, brother, and mother

His creativity of the mind is so immaculate and abundant that he can see beyond ordinary things

and the truth in my soul

And the way he smiles you feel this magical sensation,

And the way he looks at me with his jade green eyes, I know he sees through all of the bullshit and still seems to find the best in all people.

And he is just so silly sometimes and I can feel him emerge from his shell and be open, to this new world that we are experiencing.

A small town boy for sure but never a small heart

The biggest one I've ever seen, but and that’s not what she said

Because he gave it all to her and she chopped it up threw it away

And so his heart is conflicted,

Between something impossible that he truly desires and what he reluctantly can have

And I am willing to dig to find the pieces and put them back together again.

But some parts have dissolved into nothingness and will be forever lost in the abyss of the past

He will never let it show but I can feel his sadness

And when he is alone I know it is almost unbearable

His laughs, they are like echoes of a laugh.

Something reminiscent of a joy

Like it used to be tangible but something has erased it,

Hindering his ability to feel true happiness, to just feel the freedom

So I hope that I can help him forget the darkness for a little while because he makes me feel like Sunshine when I am with him.