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Sentence Rearrangement Help.?
How can rearrange this sentence to make the meaning more clear?
"My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are reinforced"
Context (Full paragraph):
"This trip introduced me to a broad, more diverse view of the world and sparked a craving for places with similar values. With each following trip, I learn that it is okay for me to be different. My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are reinforced. I gain an appreciation for the tacit beauty in every characteristic that makes each one of us unique."
6 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Ways for me to think outside the box and color outside the lines are strengthened.
. . . encouraged.
. . . explored.
. . . supported.
. . . instigated.
My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are stimulated.
Source(s): English teacher, writer - 1 decade ago
Bob did well, except he forgot to point out to actually given excellent feedback on a sentence you need the whole sentence. A little content may help too. A possible way to rearrange the sentence is to make the indirect object the object. Example (missing noun from sentence) has reinforced my ideas of "thinking outside the box" and "coloring outside the lines." I would also suggest not using the word "Ideas" it is vague.
- Ms. WorthLv 71 decade ago
You could try:
"This reinforces my ideas about thinking outside the box and coloring outside the lines."
- 1 decade ago
maybe: My ideas are reinforced to the think outside the box and color outside the lines
hope I helped
- BobLv 71 decade ago
Actually, it's not that bad. For a bit more clarity, I'd write it like this: "My ideas to think 'outside the box' and *to* 'color outside the lines' are reinforced."