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Sentence Rearrangement Help.?

How can rearrange this sentence to make the meaning more clear?

"My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are reinforced"

Update:

Context (Full paragraph):

"This trip introduced me to a broad, more diverse view of the world and sparked a craving for places with similar values. With each following trip, I learn that it is okay for me to be different. My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are reinforced. I gain an appreciation for the tacit beauty in every characteristic that makes each one of us unique."

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Ways for me to think outside the box and color outside the lines are strengthened.

    . . . encouraged.

    . . . explored.

    . . . supported.

    . . . instigated.

    My ideas to think outside the box and color outside the lines are stimulated.

    Source(s): English teacher, writer
  • 1 decade ago

    Bob did well, except he forgot to point out to actually given excellent feedback on a sentence you need the whole sentence. A little content may help too. A possible way to rearrange the sentence is to make the indirect object the object. Example (missing noun from sentence) has reinforced my ideas of "thinking outside the box" and "coloring outside the lines." I would also suggest not using the word "Ideas" it is vague.

  • 1 decade ago

    You could try:

    "This reinforces my ideas about thinking outside the box and coloring outside the lines."

  • 1 decade ago

    maybe: My ideas are reinforced to the think outside the box and color outside the lines

    hope I helped

  • Bob
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Actually, it's not that bad. For a bit more clarity, I'd write it like this: "My ideas to think 'outside the box' and *to* 'color outside the lines' are reinforced."

  • 1 decade ago

    ummmm i dunno y doya need the answer anyways?

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