read the first part of my story and review?

okay so this was started last night with a little inspiration of some old star trek episodes and too much red bull. I'm not sure about how i feel about it yet, maybe its something ill continue writing on and maybe it sucks so bad that i should stop. I am usually a good writer but lately my mind has been in off mode and this is the first thing I've written in months. constructive criticism please!

Jace Royce had grown up in the midst of war and violence, so when the alarm rung in the middle of the S.S. Genevieve’s Sunday morning mass it was no surprise for her to hear that the planet Larousse’s Queen Emalee was dead. The congregation of space cadets filed out of the onboard cathedral and started taking their places upon the ship. Their new charted course was headed to Larousse. It was a standard regulation procedure of the academy to investigate any deaths of royals or officials, but it was new to the group of space cadets. Jace quickly changed from her church uniform into the deep green cadet uniform she was required to wear for professional duty. Before Jace left her musty cabin she remembered to pin on the Captains’ pin she had been given at her last promotion ceremony.

It had only taken Jace two years to advance through four rankings. She was smart and the academy knew it as well as she did, but then again Jace wasn’t just a normal girl. As the daughter of the leader of the new world’s government, Overheid van Veir Plantren, it was her duty to perform well and always show courage and honor. It was her turn to captain the S.S. Genevieve and help stop the war that was breaking out on Larousse. Jace knew it was her turn to be a hero.