Renting Love --- thoughts?

S2 L2 Should that read; "What" had happened from the start?

I like this one, nice flow and honesty about it.

specific permit the hot tenants pay for utilities. Now, are you waiting to be a landlord? Do you have a stable hire that covers deposit quantities, pets, damages, maintenance, smoke alarms, plumbing, subletting, flow in and out training, etc? strengthen into your place build in the previous the 80s or after? have been given to take into attention the Lead Addendum while it is composed of the taxes, coverage and maintenance. who is going to pay for it? in case you will value adequate to hide all that. Is your place nicely worth that lots? I come to a determination to do what you're approximately to do. Then I moved throughout the time of city to get excitement from the magnificent thing approximately having a house throughout the time of city till the water heater broke. Than the tenants desperate to flow in some buddies and damages the storage. They moved out without paying the final month. Now I also have a house that i ought to pay for yet I have been given to restoration it first. I merely wish you stable good fortune

This is why I say love is what YOU feel not what the other person feels. When you give freely, it can't be rent. When your love is no longer wanted, love means saying adios, and bringing the love somewhere where it will be appreciated.

But I am commenting on content instead of style. It reads well, flows and makes sense.

It's a very interesting idea. I like the idea. I'm glad the character in the poem is planning to marshall his/her resources so he/she can try again. It makes it hopeful.

There is a difference between love and infatuation,

we learn by experience of each.

Nice pen.

deterioration from the inside results in collapsing.