how is my powem????????????????????????????

It may be a powem, but it isn't a poem; it is a list of questions, uses no poetic devices, no figurative language. Sorry. Not a poem.

I understand where you are coming from with this poem. I'd suggest, rather then making it just a list of questions, why not try to answer some in the process of the poem. I mean one of the 6 questions if answered in a poetic manner would make a good poem in itself.

Just my thoughts.

I think you have ideas here that are incomplete. The general idea is there but you need to form them more. It is most definitely a poem so don't let other people tell you it is not. Try to punctuate it better and possibly add to it. Good start though.

no rhymes, metaphors, similies..... basically no poetic devices. 6 of 7 lines are questions, 6 of 7 are less than 5 words. there is no discription to paint a picture. i woulnt call it a poem sorry

too many questions and no answers

if you add some answers it will be beautiful