Is this a good speech? made it myself and going to recite it infront of my school?

Sounds good to me...All they might say is that its a bit too much of reality, when children nowadays have to live in fantasy.

Absolute gibberish! for a 21yr old you have the minimum of education. You can't spell, use apostrophes or string a coherent sentence together!

I only hope you can speak better than you write.

Allow me to correct some grammatical and spelling error.

I also did a few suggestion. ;]

The Earth

Why do we have to be so dependent on technology?

Day and day we kill animals, we are the savages

It's ok but I would change it to this sentence :

Day and day we kill animals savagely and mercilessly.

Are we the cold-blooded here?

We have destroyed our forest, jungles, oceans and more to be named.

Unfortunately it is never enough cause as human we are naturally insatiable so we keep abolishing this planet day by day. Matter of fact, we are the cancer of the planet! We exploited the natural resources immensely. -and we can only survive by moving to a next area and destroye it- I don't think that line is relevant.

When will this cease!? When will we finally open our eyes!?

Do we have to experience our planet evolving into a desert of technology first thing before we will eventually realize? It will be too late by then...

We have survived years before without them so why do we need them now? Is it because they ease our daily chores? If there are one thing the technology lack of, it is the fact that it's contribution to the humankind to make us lazier and less active in our life.

Do we not care about the animals, the air we breath, the oceans, the earth, our next generation?

People who lives their life indifferent about a thing but just striving for number one. All of them saying ''I'm going to heaven". I hereby utterly deny that!!

Doesn't matter what religious you're from or what you believe in, its a wrong act!

Everyone has one and i repeat, ONLY ONE life and they spend it on ruining the lives of others.

When will we cease the destruction and the massive havoc we are causing every single day!?

When the whole oceans is intoxicated?

When it starts to rain acid everywhere?

When everyone is infected with virus?

People, subtly, we are the actual virus! The human race is a plague upon the world!

Only a handful of humans actualy deserve to live. I'm embarrassed to call myself one because of the shameful act of my kind in the past and present. ..

The earth gives us everything and what is our way of showing our gratitude??

Look around us, people celebrating because they survived a whole year.

Can the forest enrapture that? Can the oceans enrapture that? What is there to be celebrated?

What is left of the forest is a microscopic sliver of hope that we, the ignorant humans did not continually explore and diminish them.

Satan did not bow to Adam because he said that humans are full of sins and will do nothing but destroy the earth.

(did he really said that?) o_o

So god send him to hell, striped him of his wings.

Now look at the earth, only 30% or even less humans are trying to save the cosmic.

Was Satan wrong? The person we call devil..?

No he was not and he was completely right. He knew the human race would do this.

Still some ignorant fools say it will all get better.

Let me tell you, it won't by itself get up and actually do something so when you grow up participate in saving our Earth so when the day come, the day when all humans will be judged by God and Satan, be the humans who have earned the right to live.

ps: I actually think the title The Earth is not suitable with this. It's more about what the human race had done to the Earth. I suggest changing it to something like What Have We Done.

Have a great day and good luck with the recital. =D

the title of your speech is THE EARTH, but your speech is more of a cry against the way humans are treating it. you can either change your speech or change the title to something appropriate to the content.

judging by your spelling, i would say that you are pretty young, so i suggest you get your speech checked for spelling and grammatical errors. not that it matters a lot when you are going to be reading aloud, but it might help you to understand it a bit better.

Very profound , really well thought out.

How good it is depends on two things, is English your only language? And what grade are you in?

There are several words misspelled and a couple incorrect words used.

But the speach is pretty good though

Here it is corrected.

The Earth

Why do we depend on technology every day and why do we kill animals.

We are the savages. We have destroyed our forest,jungles and oceans but it isnt enough we keep growing more. We are the cancer of the planet. We use all available resources and we can only survive by moving to a next area and destroy it. When will this cease, when will we finally open our eyes, do we need to see our planet turn into a desert of technology, we have survived years before without them so why do we use them, because they make our lives easier? What about the animals, the air, the oceans, the earth what about them. People who live there lives not caring about a thing but just looking out for number one. All of them saying''im going to heaven'' your wrong it doesnt matter what religion your from or what you believe in. Its what you do, people have one and only one life and they spend it on ruining the lives of others. When will we cease the destruction when the oceans turns green? When it starts to rain acid everywhere, when everyone is infected with a virus. People we are the virus! The human race is a plague apon the world. Only a handful of humans actually deserve to live. Im ashamed to call myself a human because of our past and present. The earth gives us everything and what did we do to it? Look around you, people celebrating because they survived a whole year. Can the forest say that? Can the oceans say that? Satan did not bow to Adam because he said that humans are full of sins and will do nothing but destroy the earth, so God sent him to hell, striped him of his wings. Now look at the earth, only 30% or even less humans are actually trying to save our planet. Was Satan wrong the person we call devil. No he wasnt he was completely right. He knew the human race would do this. Still people say it will all get better. It wont by itself get up and actually do something when you grow up participate in saving our earth so when the day come, the day when all humans will be judged by God and Satan, be the humans who have earned the right to live.

I got most of the errors but good speech. Good luck

wow :O thats really really good. it must have took AGES to right !

its got lots of detail in it,and i did actually read it btw ! ;)

its a really good speech but the title doesnt go with the rest of it

wow its really good and this is the first time i ever went in the environment section on yahoo......i normally go on beauty and style,entertainment and music,arts and humanities and polls and surveys sections .......and your the first question i ever answered on this section .......xxxxxxxxx