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How do you like my rap song?
this is the first one i have ever written so i wanna see if its any good
you got the key to my heart but i got to make a fresh start
i tried to make our love stronger but i cant wait any longer
i know what i have to do and baby i cant be with you
so stop obsessin over me i have to be who i want to be
6 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
For your first one its good. You have good rhyme and flow. Keep writing you will get better with every lyric you write.
- phillippejrLv 45 years ago
Match one million- Common - I used to like H.E.R. Match two- Tupac - Dear Mama(R.I.P.) Match three- N.W.A. - Straight Outta Compton Match four- Mobb Deep - Shook Ones Match five- Busta Rhymes - Woo-Ha! Got You All In Check Match 6- NaS - One Mic Match 7- Both!
- t h e MRS. ♥Lv 41 decade ago
That sucks.
It's not a song.
More like a really cheesy attempt at a poem.
By the way, any real rapper wouldn't ask people's opinions on their sh*t.
- 1 decade ago
plain, boring, predictable.... well look.. there's plenty of love songs, try to be unique atleast!!!
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- Anonymous1 decade ago
its short and lame
Source(s): real hip hop - Anonymous1 decade ago
ITS AWESOME, ID SO LISTERN TO IT!!!! :)
